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Abandoned House
Contributed by
Demonic_Depression_7625
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:45:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Blood trickles down the walls
Seeping through like veins
Maggots falling through the ceiling
And clogging up the drains
Snakes coiled under furniture
Waiting for their prey
Tortured souls in the mirrors
Burning throughout the day
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2005-08-12 01:45:31]
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Re: Abandoned House
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:49:57 AM AEST
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not gross, creative! good write short but potent
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Re: Abandoned House
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:52:26 AM AEST
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Successfully gross dark write. Kind of makes my stomach turn, but hey, anything for the arts! lol
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Re: Abandoned House
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by Archie on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:02:54 AM AEST
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| I don't think this is gross. This looks like a view of tortured souls and those awaiting to be. Good write. |
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