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The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died...
Contributed by
wikedladi
on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:14:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I found you
Wondering alone in the dark
The sparkle in your eyes has dimmed
So unsure of youself.
Stop Doubting!
Grab hold of yourself before you're all but lost
I long for that sparkle
Plz come back to me
I've searched for so long
Why will you give up now?
How could you show me what i want and then take it away?
Drowned me in a cloud of lust.
Take my form and bend me
Show me warmth i so long to have
You and i share the same fate
Caught up in a current we cannot escape
Yet to look in your eyes i feel safe once more
For our love is eternal
You are the one i adore
Copyright ©
wikedladi
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2005-08-12 03:14:56]
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Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died...
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:57:19 PM AEST
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| well written, crystal images. good job. |
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Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died...
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:14:38 PM AEST
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| beautiful... sad and heartfelt write, someone is lucky to be loved... make sure they know. |
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Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died...
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by robertdavidson on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:00:01 AM AEST
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This tribute to love is beautiful. I like it.
Robert Davidson. |
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Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:23:45 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel better luck for you then i had hope he knows how lucky he is. |
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