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Gone
Contributed by
Lilbabe
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Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 10:59:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The feeling is there
A feeling of deep despair
I hate you for everything
Inside I'm aching
You said you loved me
Why can't you see
You never showed your care
You weren't there
In my time of tears
To fight away my fears
Now I've said good-bye
Hopefully, no more will I cry
Copyright ©
Lilbabe
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2005-08-12 22:59:40]
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Re: Gone
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:07:05 PM AEST
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| its hard to believe what they say, if thier actions dont match! great write potent! welcome to Y.P.D.C.!!!! i hope to read many of your writes. keep it up! |
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Re: Gone
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:55:22 AM AEST
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| impressive. always nice to get some new blood with talents. =] |
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