|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lost love
Contributed by
Thedreamer777
on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:10:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
|
Where is my love?
My love is lost
buried deep in the depths of time.
Covered up in dust and grime
how can i find this love of mine
years and years go by and by.
I just hope she comes before i die.
Where is my love
this love of mine
love lost in the depths of time
covered up in rust and slime
How long must pray and wait
before i meet this awesome fate
will i live to tell the day.
or will i die in endless pain
Copyright ©
Thedreamer777
... [
2005-08-13 03:10:48]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lost love
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 08:56:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
your anguish was really felt!!
Emotive piece....I hope your heart does find the love it desires dear poet... |
|
|
Re: Lost love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:55:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good write, very emotional. Loved the word play. |
|
|
Re: Lost love
(User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:45:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow...awesome write!! Loved the flow. Hope your love comes back. Tanya |
|
|
Re: Lost love
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 08:41:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| hi welcome to YPDC. You write very similar to a girl I know on this site, her name is Brittany. She never capitalizes her i's. Oh well, probably just a strange coincidence. |
|
|
Re: Lost love
(User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:43:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this means so much to me...
i am not lost to you,i am here ,your not going to die in pain,if this is who i think it is,i love you with all my heart sweet romeo,and soon we will be together again like we were when god made us soulmates in heaven .i love you with all my heart. |
|
|
Re: Lost love
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:15:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Be careful dreamer boy, blackholesun, has a lover in Texarkana, she's still calling Peter, she has James and Bart. Your on the list though brother, hey you lucky dog, NOT !!!Love to her is someone with money that will take care of her. She's a mooch. Least she's mooching off others and not Peter and the rest of her road family. Man your going to need lots of balls to keep up with this liar. Good luck. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
