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The Lady In The Dark2
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:46:16 AM in AEST
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The Lady In The Dark 2
She came out of the dark
into the light
A raving beauty
what a magnificent sight
So many wasted years
alone, there in the dark
Now enjoying her life
as happy as a lark
A good lesson to be learned
for all of those in need
Living in the dark
you will never ever succeed
Please heed this lady
and herlesson well learned
For all those in the dark
live the life that you yearned
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-13 06:46:16]
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by Randyjohnson on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:37:13 AM AEST
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| This is the only poem I've seen that's a sequel. Great poem. Well written. |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by bernard2 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:53:30 AM AEST
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| Good Poem Bruce it gives some very good advice. Top marks from bernard2 |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by wikedladi on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:35:58 PM AEST
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Great way to extend on the poem! Good Work!
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:20:07 PM AEST
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| awesome again |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:14:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful words. Beautiful lady.
Rita |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by Stew on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:42:50 PM AEST
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i didn't comment on the first one because i thought: why not just kill two birds with one stone? I loved them! they were just so expressive i think the word is, but anyway I loved it!
stew XXOO |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:38:32 PM AEST
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as every beautiful woman should come from the dark......... a dreamy write Bruce
Michelle |
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Re: The Lady In The Dark2
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 06:42:43 AM AEST
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Like Stew, I just wanted to comment after I read the second one. (lack of time and all that) The message is such a wonderful one and I hope the person it was intended for gets it. I'm sure they will. You are a wiz with words and paint a very vivid picture. Kudos and Bravo!
Peace to ya
Thumps ;o) |
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