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Wading
Contributed by
Dralion
on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:46:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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A babbling brook beckons.
Shoes stuffed with socks
and sandals strewn alongside.
Cool water trickles
over tiny toes.
Washing away
worries.
As one and all
become
cheerful childern.
Splashing and sloshing
in the soothing stream.
Copyright ©
Dralion
... [
2005-08-13 13:46:28]
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Re: Wading
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by wikedladi on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:34:12 PM AEST
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| Very nice! i really like the picutre you painted about the shoes lying by the shore. Good Job! |
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Re: Wading
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:38:57 AM AEST
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The imagery here is great. Reminds me of small streams we would play in when in Colorado for the summer. Lovely little streams just meandering along. Lovely little poem.
Rita |
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Re: Wading
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 01:01:34 PM AEST
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This is a awsome write..Brilliance proceeds you!
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