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I know youre still here...
Contributed by
wikedladi
on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:30:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My Brown Eyed Mistress
Where have you gone?
You're no longer in my grasp
So many nights i spent in your warm embrace
But know when i see you...
There is no look upon your face
I miss our days gone by...
For whom did they have to die?
My Brown Eyed Mistress
I know one day our time will come again
A day far off... When you will bear a grin
For althought you've made this change
I know of what you truely desire
We are one in the same....
Feared creatures whom can not be tame
I shall wait in the darkness, peering out only to see....
If My Brown Eyed Mistress has come back for me
Copyright ©
wikedladi
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2005-08-13 14:30:45]
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Re: I know youre still here...
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by TrowaDaryk on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:47:58 PM AEST
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| wow i really liked this poem it has a vivid sound to it, it sparks the imagination and for some reason it has a sorta happy feel to it with the darkness in it i really like it |
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Re: I know youre still here...
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by brokenwings on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:51:32 PM AEST
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good write i liked it alot ...
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Re: I know youre still here...
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by Kie on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:54:21 PM AEST
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May the breeze beckon her to return....
Sometimes, one just knows when another is still there. You just feel it and you wait--like two chess players unsure of who's turn it is...
This is an excellent poem.
I feel fortunate to have came across it.
Kie :) |
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Re: I know youre still here...
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by Sahara on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 06:19:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful, great write. I sincerely hope everything works out for you.
Sonya |
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