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What you see what you feel
Contributed by
zerina
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:43:41 PM in AEST
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What you see
and what you feel
may be different from what is real
what a person holds inside
they just want to put aside
so sick of the pain
they walk in the rain
Hoping to wash away all of
the scars
all the tears
and all of their fears
what you see
and what you feel
is different from what is real
Copyright ©
zerina
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2005-08-13 21:43:41]
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Re: What you see what you feel
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:59:21 AM AEST
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| Nice, short, to the poitn poem. Nice write |
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Re: What you see what you feel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:37:52 PM AEST
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| great write keep it up |
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