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Dreams
Contributed by
SewnTogether
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Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:52:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hate how you treat me
Why cant you take me serious?
My dreams mean nothing to you
You want me to become
Something I dont want to be
Something I am not
You treat me as if I was a rat
Scrounging around
And annoying you so
Why dont I runaway
I would do more good than harm
You say you care about me
But you could careless
You can say anything you want
You can do whatever you want
But you wont make me
Feel so insignificant
And when I come back
We will see whos laughing at who
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Re: Dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:07:18 AM AEST
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well i would say that as long as you dont continue the cycle, you learn what not to be. this part stuck out to me,
"But you wont make me
Feel so insignificant"
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Re: Dreams
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:52:59 PM AEST
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aww... this is a good write, but it sucks how you have to put up with this. i take it the pressure is from your parents... so try talking to them (i know kinda cheesy and why would you take advise from a perfect stranger... but think about it, if you already feel like running away... how can it hurt anymore?) but, if you do run away-- promise me it won't be too long and you'll go somewhere, safe & warm and have stuff to eat and drink. just, take care of yourself. i wish you luck that everything works out! but, good write, keep it up!
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