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regretting the choice
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 07:54:34 PM in AEST
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tell me what i did to be commited
sinned and portrayed as though my own witness
i saw her crying behind the steel
not at all understanding what was the deal
how could he go and do those dreadful things
pain stabbing the loved ones he had now gone
how can i stay with a man called murderer
must i be one and he as well alone
she left me a note slid through the steel bars
it shot me so quick and broke my heart
oh god what have i done; no turning back
sweet memories now is all that i have
i left him as my final choice; what if i was next
is his killing spree over is the anger lain to rest
i tryed apologizing all day and all night
she made my life bright
if i knew what my choices would do
i would never have done it
he said sorry but i didnt know what to say
maybe ill respond tommorow or the next day
she responded just now and she said
i love you
but......
i told him that i cant stand a killers bloody touch
my woman
my love
made me regret
and i am sorry
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Re: regretting the choice
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by Stellar on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:45:14 PM AEST
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Very interesting, dark.
I liked it.
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Re: regretting the choice
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:09:55 AM AEST
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| I like it. Good write. |
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Re: regretting the choice
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 06:09:55 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. i have made choices that i regret even to this day so I can relate in a way (no I did not kill anyone)
Excellent poem! |
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