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When I don't know what to say
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:49:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When I dont know what to say
Ill do many different things
To hide all my fears away
And all the pain they bring
When I dont know what to say
I will sometimes make a joke
Or say something obscure
Just so I dont choke
When I dont know what to say
Often times Ill act a clown
Anything to make you laugh
So you dont see me so down
When I dont know what to say
Sometimes I say nothing at all
Its easier that way...
Than to let you to see me fall
When I dont know what to say
All though it doesnt happen much
These are the times Im longing
That Im longing for your touch
And now Im trying really hard
To find just the right way...
How can I say I love you...?
When I dont know what to say
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:59:58 PM AEST
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awww.... good, but sad write. it was like you were describing me and many other people. the feeling of hiding emotions is strong. it's easier to put on a mask then let your heart and mind spill out. just, it's not too healthy. you should find someone you trust and like enough to tell these feelings to. it was a great poem though and you definitely knew what to say here! ; D. well done, keep up the good work!!
and take care of yourself, i hope you find that person i was talking about!
~sprints |
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:23:46 PM AEST
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well u said it wonderfully in this write.
hugs,
emy |
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:33:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful write..Until you find a way within your heart to say your sorry that fear in you grows stronger.
Best thing a love can have is honesty with one another..
rest of it works itself out..
Maybe start by sending them this beautiful poem.. Keep your chin up..Huggggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:40:20 PM AEST
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| you just did and you did it in the most beautiful heart felt way. I understand. |
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by Stellar on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:41:44 PM AEST
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I love that ending...it gave me chills. It was such a heartfelt and sincere poem. I very much enjoyed this.
Take care,
Liz |
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:06:29 PM AEST
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| good job... I enjoyed it. |
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by Demonic_Depression_7625 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:20:17 PM AEST
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i really liked that poem. it's so emotional :(
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 05:30:14 AM AEST
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| That is a brilliant poem, so many people feel this way at times I know I do, x |
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Re: When I don't know what to say
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by MDodgen on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:24:21 PM AEST
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beautiful write. we all know what its like to feel this way, i can relate completely. it flows together in a way that makes it music to your ears. good job. powerful words. 5 stars
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