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LIFES OBSTACLES
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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WITH LIFE THERE ARE MANY OBSTACLES,
ACHIEVING WHAT WE STRIVE,
ALWAYS LOOKING FOR MIRACLES,
JUST TO HELP US SURVIVE,
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THERE IS NO TEST AT THE END,
NOONE IS KEEPING SCORE,
PROBLEMS WILL SOON MEND,
AND WE LIVE ON LIKE BEFORE,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
GOD GIVES US OPEN PASSAGES,
ONLY FOR US TO CHOOSE,
LEFT WITH HIDDEN MESSAGES,
DETERMINED NOT TO LOOSE,
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LIFE IS FILLED WITH CONFUSION,
NOONE CAN FIGURE OUT,
SOME THINGS ARE JUST AN ILLUSION,
THIS I HAVE NO DOUBT,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
TO THE MIND IS IMAGINATION,
WONDERS OF THE SOUL,
LEARNING TO FIND OUR DESTINATION,
MAKING ONES LIFE WHOLE!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-01-14 03:00:00]
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Re: LIFES OBSTACLES
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:06:05 AM AEST
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Christina you let it all out girl...this is different...but very inspirational...you keep writing, you never know what might come out of your emotions...beautiful write girl...
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Re: LIFES OBSTACLES
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:28:30 AM AEST
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Good write, Grrl....
Jenni |
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Re: LIFES OBSTACLES
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by aernby on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:56:36 AM AEST
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good for you -- as long as the words come you'll be fine
good write
aern+ |
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Re: LIFES OBSTACLES
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 07:56:28 AM AEST
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| Christina, great write, wonderful uplift in the early morning, thanks so much, |
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Re: LIFES OBSTACLES
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 01:25:25 PM AEST
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| Oh yeah...life is full of surprises and you wrote about it to perfection! Great write! Larry :o) |
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Re: LIFES OBSTACLES
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:33:42 AM AEST
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The last three stanzas are really inspiring..
I am very lucky to read this poem..my dear Christina..Many many thanks..venkat |
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