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Emptiness is bliss
Contributed by
wikedladi
on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:44:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm so Very tired
I wish it would all just fade away
To the emptiness, the dark cold
At least here i dont have to hear a sound
The silence is blissful.. with no one around
The void is so perfect... theres nothing to see
I can just lay here... Lay here and be
I no loner have to care
About this world i can no longer bare
As time stands still... I no longer feel
The hatred that was grown... Grown to help me deal
Instead i am calmed...It all seems to clear
I no longer have to care.. Never again shall i tear
Time begins again... and now i see
The light is coming back... Back towards me
No longer shall i care
I have nothing left to spare
Ive given all i could
I gave it what i should
No kindess left inside
For it has surely died
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wikedladi
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2005-08-15 01:44:10]
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Re: Emptiness is bliss
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:56:34 AM AEST
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oh wikedladi, The desolation and depression are so thick and heavy and deep it left me stunned for several minutes while I remembered a similar time for me. Your writing was so precise I actually could feel it again. Be strong, brighter and lighter days are coming.
Peace and Hugs,
john |
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Re: Emptiness is bliss
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by Zandria on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 07:44:07 AM AEST
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Well said!
All sneers of a broken spirit aside...I applaud this. |
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