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5am
Contributed by
Brandyx7
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Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 09:07:42 PM in AEST
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How agreeable it would be if my alarm
clock sounded like a rooster
instead of a screaming siren
in my ear.
Id be awakened by the rousing call
of a farm animal,
in the city.
Of course, now you have
your choice of sounds to sleep
and awake to: mountain stream, spring rain,
a heartbeat.
This one, Ive never understood.
Who would want to wake up to the sound
of a pounding heart thats not his own?
Wake up in the middle of the night
and hear the reminder of mans mortality?
No. I prefer the rooster call,
the coffee percolator,
my dogs annoying bark at daybreak,
the silent swish of my his feet
on Burberry carpet as he dresses
in the dark of the room.
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Brandyx7
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2005-08-15 21:07:42]
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Re: 5am
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 09:52:28 PM AEST
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| Great write, keep it up. |
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Re: 5am
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:04:03 PM AEST
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beautiful poem make scence yeh as 4 the heart? humm a clever write nice style . . .
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