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Inner Turmoils
Contributed by
Killingmehslowly
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:29:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look forth with vacant stare
Almost more than you can bear
Emotions null
Thoughts dull
Shun turmoils once forgotten
No voiding this mood rotten
Expect no resistance
Seek not assistance
Self-absorbed, wallow in compassion
Don your black and dreary fashions
Broadcast to earth
***** up since birth
Time for it to end
Learn to fend and not depend.
Copyright ©
Killingmehslowly
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2005-08-16 01:29:13]
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Re: Inner Turmoils
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:46:36 AM AEST
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| Hm I really liked this poem, I understand what are you saying. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Inner Turmoils
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by PoeticHybrid on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:35:14 AM AEST
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| We are often our worst critic. I think it was well written. Maybe lengthen the third and fourth line to make it more uniform. Just a suggestion. |
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