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If Only
Contributed by
Adrianna
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Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:57:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If only Id taken the chance on you
If only Id taken that risk
Where would we be now?
If only Id taken the chance on you
Would things have been different?
Now Im messed up on the inside
Thinking of what couldve been
I look into your eyes and wonder if you feel the same
Copyright ©
Adrianna
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2005-08-16 13:57:25]
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Re: If Only
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by Alibi on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 02:12:02 PM AEST
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| The neverending would've, could've, should'ves! They can be torture can't they? Your feelings of longing were felt in this piece. Nice write! |
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Re: If Only
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by Darkhorse71 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 03:05:19 PM AEST
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a good heartfelt poem, Adrianna. Just think though, if you can still look in his eyes you can still take the risk.
Peace, john |
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Re: If Only
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by Sahara on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 04:19:54 PM AEST
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| Great write, haven't we all been there wondering what could have been, or thought if only we did this instead of that. |
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