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my man the barrier
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:44:14 PM in AEST
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against brick walls my barrier slain
protecting me with an everlasting pain
that we could never be but he so bravely fought
but death around the corner i thought not
quickly vanishing from this world
hiding what we must have forever hold
but the journey now is spent alone
and my barrier no longer protects my home
barrier that i beseeched to be
the one and only just for me
but his eyes turned gray in the gunshot
and a bloody barrier is what ive got
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Re: my man the barrier
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by sride686 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:36:46 AM AEST
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| This was a good write the question is why didn’t you get any comments. It was worded very well but had a really sad meaning to it. Well done and I’ll read more of your writes just wanted to start with the one with no reads. Bye for now….Steve |
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