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Ink Void
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
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Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 08:15:09 PM in AEST
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Do you ever draw circles with your pen
Running through your tracks over and over again?
Do you ever move faster and faster,
Creating a spherical disaster?
An abyss of black ink
You hope the more you trace,
The deeper you'll sink.
Hours later holes go through your paper
Page after page the circles appear
And in to your thoughts, you disappear.
How long can you trace?
How far can you fall?
It's a race to hit the bottom,
To get to the end,
Where you feel nothing at all.
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Re: Ink Void
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:02:07 PM AEST
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lol It sounds like how I used to spend my 'daze' in school...: )
I like this write, on the surface it seems as random as the doodling, but then that ending really clinches the darker emotions lurking below the surface of this piece...Nicely done.
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Re: Ink Void
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:27:58 PM AEST
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yup.......i get a bit like this.....
great potrayal of writing.........i can sense the escape and release you wish to get from writing poetry....
moving! |
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Re: Ink Void
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:29:30 PM AEST
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| also reminds me how i spent my days in school trying to find a void to escape in great write |
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Re: Ink Void
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:50:11 AM AEST
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| yes, i have done this numerous of times . It somehow seems to help in a weird satisfactional stress relief way. |
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Re: Ink Void
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:43:23 AM AEST
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no one ive ever read had expressed it better...and yet youve managed to put it so simply....the desperation, anguish....they all hit you hard in the face....my best write of yours...
love,
Umang. |
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