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the rhythm of the city
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 08:15:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the rhythm of the city an emontionless machine
manufacturing reality shinny but unclean
built on sand and fantasy a mirror of mirage
reflected by the silver screen the chrome in the garage
vision blocked by concrete callused hearts encased
deafened by the drumbeat tongues to seared to taste
masked by thrum of engines and the chatter of the screen
the still small voice is buried the foot path isnt seen
Images and idols technology devised
words of cotton candy that dissolve before your eyes
intellect and science worshiped by decree
giving credit to illusion so the chained belive there free
fundamental skeletons in self-appointed roles
cloaking robes of office but carnivorous of souls
speaking words that come from knowledge but do not come from light
the letters lacking spirit addind darkness to the night
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Re: the rhythm of the city
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by juliette on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:11:08 PM AEST
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Kicks ---!
This is awesome!
I don't even know how to comment on it because it is way out of my league - the way I wish I could write......I have never read a poem with such intense imagery.....love it!
Thanks for sharing!
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Re: the rhythm of the city
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:25:36 PM AEST
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oh yes............this is a good one lol
....thought-provoking and cruelly honest indeed....
this was astounding.........pleasure to read!!!
Be proud my friend!!
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Re: the rhythm of the city
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:54:14 PM AEST
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Good work, my friend.
so true.
huggs,
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Re: the rhythm of the city
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:36:25 PM AEST
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Mad props, THAT was well written. Especially this
Images and idols technology devised
words of cotton candy that dissolve before your eyes
intellect and science worshiped by decree
giving credit to illusion so the chained belive there free
One of my favorites on here...nicely done man... |
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