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Lesbian Love Thursday
Contributed by
def-linus
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:36:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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They keep quiet under silent city skies
to hug eachother and hold eachother down
she comes down the street in the slow pace
so enjoyable to watch and so attractive in her walk
the green sweater they wore together today
was given in secrecy to tease their wants
to stay in captive along the border of their minds
her bright colored makeup made up for the silence
the creative chunks of passion passing through the lime light
as the clock continues to turn past hours
she turns past minutes to think to herself
"a dirty little secret of madness i said to her"
a whole world, a boring whore - off color education
disjointed at her walking distance
she doesn't walk off too far
did everybody find out? did everybody know?
oh how she caressed me with shadows and hid me in her word
layered and red and hung up at a color picture show
they dive into an upsidedown smile
and within a breaking second, they both disappear
to calm themselves until it blows over
"i'm passion and i'm traveling and concentrating
deep into the solitude of ground"
a bakery full of birthday cakes and suprises
a dirty little secret of madness that pleases
they engulfed eachother in sublime serenity
a whole world, a boring whore -
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Re: Lesbian Love Thursday
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by Rae on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 05:06:44 PM AEST
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i love this.
whole world, a boring whore. |
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Re: Lesbian Love Thursday
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 05:19:43 PM AEST
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Interesting write........ This was well done...
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Re: Lesbian Love Thursday
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by emokid on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 05:54:09 PM AEST
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this was interesting it shows how all of us really love in the same way and some just have to hide because others wont understand nice job
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Re: Lesbian Love Thursday
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 07:20:32 PM AEST
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| very interesting. i like it alot. |
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Re: Lesbian Love Thursday
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:42:56 PM AEST
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Well totally...........differ..........I dont know exactly what to write.! I dont do womwn, but each to their own?>!lol.......I like men.! But god write, for the unknown.
brew~ |
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