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what would happen
Contributed by
lost13
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:49:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the soul would have no rainbow
if the eyes had no tears
but if the teary eyes were nonexistent
then sadness would be less painful
having no outlet to the soul
no freedom to roam, no source to spread from
maybe then the emotion would disapppear altogether
but if sadness disappeared, would happiness go with it?
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Re: what would happen
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:01:39 PM AEST
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| this is sad but such a great write. i know everyone can prolli relate! well done |
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Re: what would happen
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:01:55 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem, I understand where you are going with this. Without sad there would be no happy, without happy there would be no sad. SLipSiX. |
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Re: what would happen
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:54:00 PM AEST
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Well we all go through it.it does hurt and suck.but move on,.there are more out there.!
Brew~ |
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Re: what would happen
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:49:10 PM AEST
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| That is a good question if sadness disappeared would happiness go with it. Sometimes i wander if it even matters as long as i don't feel the sadness. I know how you feel. Good write |
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