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yOu
Contributed by
graci
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you make me laugh
you make me smile
you make me forget my blues
even for a while
you make me pout
you make me cry
you make me sad
everytime you say goodbye.
you make me shout for joy
or howl in pain
you make me see the sunshine
or feel the cold rain.
i hope you won't notice
i hope you'll never see
there are so many things
you can make me do
simply because
i am me
and you are you.
Copyright ©
graci
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2005-08-17 21:28:19]
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Re: yOu
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:36:47 PM AEST
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| A romantic poem, but I think it would have sounded better if wrote You are you and I am me at the bottom, but hey it is your poem, other then that I enjoyed reading this write. SLipSiX. |
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Re: yOu
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:39:34 PM AEST
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| very sweet and romanitc keep writing |
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