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*****
Contributed by
helzwar007
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:34:23 PM in AEST
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I can't even draw how my heart feels inside,
For once it hurts too much to even cry.
I can't be good enough for anyone it seems, no matter what I do,
People look at me and say, "screw you."
My heart has been ripped before,
And now it's ripped even more.
People don't think I have any ***** feelings,
But I do and it feels like the darkness of my heart is sealing.
It makes me sick to think that people could be so cruel,
But then I remember the "Golden Rule."
"Treat others as you would like to be treated?"
If that's so then how come my heart feels cheated?
I'm nice to others and they treat me like *****,
Then I realize I'm a mistake God couldn't omit.
I don't know why, and I don't really care,
If I ended my life, people would be happy I wasn't there.
So I say to the screwed up world from my hearts cell,
I hope everyone has fun in hell.
Copyright ©
helzwar007
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2005-08-17 21:34:23]
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Re: *****
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:15:23 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem, I know how you feel, I have felt that many times before, we all have, hearts n hugGLes. SLipSiX. |
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Re: *****
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:37:54 PM AEST
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I think everybody can relate to this
good write and hope that things get better. |
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Re: *****
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by His_3_Nails on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 07:15:13 PM AEST
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Baby, I am so glad this was a long time ago......... Im sorry you felt like that, but we all somewhere in our lives feel that way..... If it is persistant, pray......... God will omit...
Love you Sarah,
Brandon |
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