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No Longer “Just A Friend”
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:24:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Things that once I knew, now find change-
So much stuff that I find I need to rearrange-
You and I can no longer use the term just a friend-
As upon one another we have come to depend
Once we traveled separate paths all alone-
So much emptiness we have often known-
But in you I have found shelter from lifes rain-
As you helped my soul release its bitter pain
We met, you and I it seemed only by chance-
Who knew that the future held such a romance?
Yet here we are now standing face to face-
Sharing this moment together lost in loves embrace
Two hearts, once cast aside and left behind-
No longer have any reason to remain confined-
We share special moments locked in time-
A love that could never be called a crime
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2005-08-17 23:24:40]
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Re: No Longer “Just A Friend”
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by Sahara on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:27:20 PM AEST
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Very beautiful discription of love.
Sonya |
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Re: No Longer “Just A Friend”
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:36:45 PM AEST
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| very sweet and romantic. I know what you are talking about. Good luck |
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Re: No Longer “Just A Friend”
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:41:38 PM AEST
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| yup thats it pefectly... great job. i can relate. A++++ |
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Re: No Longer “Just A Friend”
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:42:14 PM AEST
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Such a sweet tale of love. Cupid knows what he his doing. He has had lots of experience. We may not always understand, but he and the universe do. Special poem. I really enjoyed this.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: No Longer “Just A Friend”
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:03:20 AM AEST
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Lovely write......its true........the best relationships blossom forth from friendship...
enjoyable read!!! |
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Re: No Longer “Just A Friend”
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:15:54 AM AEST
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Great poem! I wish me and my bestfriend
would have the same fate. I love her so
much than what she sees. You should read
my poem, "Just a Friend", because the title
of your poem somehow coincides with mine
in a very beautiful way.
Keep writing, I'll keep on reading.
-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope |
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