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Behind the Smile
Contributed by
ButchCorpuz
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:55:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I see your tears as though they were my own
With each moment that you are alone
I feel your pain as though the wound was mine
Given the chance, Id make everything fine
And I know that its been quite a while
Since the last time I saw your true smile
Now you just wear a mask of happiness
Hoping that it would cover the loneliness
That I see through the mask that you wear
I feel the pain you can no longer bear
I want you to know that Im here for you
Each time you cry, Ill be crying too
And let your tears fall on my shoulder
Ill always be here to make things better
And you will always find a friend in me
Sharing the pain that others fail to see
So please, I beg you, give me one chance
To ease the pain made by lost romance
Ill help you recover, Ill help you fight
Ill comfort you, Ill kiss you goodnight
Ill give you everything that you need
Love, care, time, even the air that I breathe
Id gladly die if it would help you live
Theres no limit to what Im willing to give
For you to be truly happy is all that I ask
And see a real smile underneath your mask
- Butch-
-The Betrayer of Hope-
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ButchCorpuz
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2005-08-18 08:55:07]
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Re: Behind the Smile
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:02:08 AM AEST
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Aww.... this is a beautiful write.
I think you should show her this, you never know she could feel the same way. |
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Re: Behind the Smile
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by JenJen on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:54:54 AM AEST
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You are a very loving friend to Jena, i hope she relizes that soon rather then later
a very good emotional write keep it up
All my love, hope and wishes
Jenny
xxx |
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Re: Behind the Smile
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:30:32 AM AEST
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i wish someone felt that way torwards me...i really like your poem, the person u are writng this to should be very happy that she has you in her life...i would be!
~dreamer~ |
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Re: Behind the Smile
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by MarLites on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:17:23 AM AEST
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| Oh my goodness this was great. I envision my guy writing this for me. She must be very special show it to her. And I like your title better Why I won't forget. Thanks for reading. |
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