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Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:49:40 PM in AEST
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I'm one without a name,
What is me reason of being?
Why am I here,
When all I know is hurt,
Me skin is crawling
I feel it shivering
Veins filled with poison
The heart stops beating
Left to be a waste,
Loving you is decomposing me
It is eating me body from within,
Feel it being eaten by the bugs,
The bugs of love that turned into Maggets
Eating their way out of this waste
Preparing themselves to turn to flies
Flying out this rotting body,
Release me from this pain,
Leave me to heal,
This Heart, Body and Soul,
Decomposed.......
~~ Nats ~~
Copyright ©
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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2005-08-18 15:49:40]
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Re: Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
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by juliette on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:10:30 PM AEST
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Nats - as cold as this may sound and hard as it may seem to do, consider urself lucky that his feelings are out in the open.........go ahead and "decompose" sunshine, and then build urself back up, so that someone else can love you and be everything you need him to be. Thanks for sharing your work - I was impressed!
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Re: Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:23:07 PM AEST
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wow i am impress with this write so intense and with so much emotion.
well done on this.
you get 5 stars from me.
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Re: Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
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by Darkhorse71 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:49:15 PM AEST
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Hi Nats, You sure did an outstanding job in letting out a lot of your feelings. Definitely worth a 5. I'm so sorry for the pain you're going through. I wish I could fight off your demons and ease all your pain, but unfortunately all I can do is to be here if you need to talk.
Peace and lots of HUGGSS, john |
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Re: Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 05:42:39 PM AEST
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My i am speechless...was a lil dark but so beautiful!!..i can relate to this write.
Best wishes to you hun..
May you find a love of a lifetime as your reward for pain endured..
There has to be a rainbow after the rain..
Hope you find yours.. keep up the beautiful writings..
Huggggggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
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by rosethorn100 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 07:29:15 PM AEST
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| wow nats - gr8 write - good u letting feeling out girlie - but as one person said on the comment at least it out in the open now - now u can move on and find somebody else - u a very special person nats don't ever believe or think any diff. i know at first it very painful experince a horrible sickning feeling in ur stomach - but like i said time will cure the wound may leave some scars - but am sure u will find somebody don't give up - u deserve the best - just give urself some time and remember like i've said am always here for u - hugggggggggggs nat xxxxx |
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Re: Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:24:40 PM AEST
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Very dark and full of despair Nats, as I know you are feeling right now.
There is love out there, sometimes it creeps up on you when you least expect it to.When that day comes I will be one of the first to smile as I know you will be smiling too.
Good luck
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Re: Heart, Body and Soul Decomposed....
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:01:15 PM AEST
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Whoa! Awesome write. You really made me feel the pain with this one and wow, have I been there too...so can definitely relate. I hope you realize that whoever "he" is must be blind in both his heart and his soul. All one has to do is read your poetry and obviously if one can see, that you obviously have a kind heart and wonderful soul. I am not an expert and I know we don't know each other but the very first poem I read of yours....your lil explorer...about your son....it's so clear to see the kindess and love you possess. And talent!!!!! Incredible.
Take care,
Tim
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