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Concrete Mirrors
Contributed by
misled_beauty
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:49:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To see the day when it all comes down
The final eclipse of majesty
Grey prophet bearing the liars crown
Traversing the earth from land and sea
The magnificent edifice falls
Bowing before the believers calls
Poets scream in rhymed lines of silence
In this society of idiot tyrants
Blasphemy is the new eloquence
When none may forgive and won't recant
The 13th sun descending on us
Lies so cloying and truth so vicious
Upon a throne of wires the sycophant never tires
Spreading a gospel of atomic reign and acid rain
With a tongue of fire that knows all of our desires
Staring at the wall without error, holding back terrors
The final mystery of humanity is revealed
Reflected crystal clear in the sheen of concrete mirrors
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2005-08-19 01:49:06]
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Re: Concrete Mirrors
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:56:37 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem, I loved the ending, good write. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Concrete Mirrors
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:10:13 AM AEST
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Very impressive writing. Awesomly unique.
good work.
huggs,
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Re: Concrete Mirrors
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:13:10 AM AEST
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deliciously intruiging...
I really enjoyes reading it..
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Re: Concrete Mirrors
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:04:52 PM AEST
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| I like the subject of this poem..very original.Well done! |
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Re: Concrete Mirrors
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by RLSS on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:19:39 PM AEST
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| Intruiging and powerful. Has so many meanings. |
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