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Cold.Faint world
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 10:53:16 AM in AEST
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sentimental piece of callowness
committed dish of gaudiness
Gargantuan ceiling spinning in circles
Someone's face so old with wrinkles
"Hellooo..." you hear the echoes
A mix of colours---so cold
Shivery mind raised goosebumps
Rushing heart fastly thumps
Darkness
A so cold. So empty.starkness
Deception
What we learnt were fabrications
Stillness of too white surroundings
Lush, bouncy and smooth cushionings
Beneath flickering lashes, absorbtion
A long time, no idea of duration
Lumpish feel towards the memory
Sudden sooth of melody
Dove embracing creatures surround the mind
dreams fallen into with a sign
Copyright ©
glassicallyunsuperficial
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2005-08-19 10:53:16]
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Re: Cold.Faint world
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 10:39:31 AM AEST
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Great poem.. I loved how it was worded.. it was a great poem...
take care
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Re: Cold.Faint world
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by Anesthetic on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 08:47:01 PM AEST
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Great write, I realy enjoyed it. The emotions were strong and flowed very naturaly. Keep up the good work:)
~Charli~ |
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