|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
In My Skin
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:59:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
|
I hate the way,
I used to feel,
Back when my looks,
Were hard to deal,
Though you tell me,
My beauty shines through,
I feel that I,
Want something new,
You tell me about my body,
How my looks knock you down,
You say I'm the prettiest girl,
You've seen in this whole town,
Your fingers fun down,
The side of my arm,
You tell me they're slender,
And you work your charm,
You say my hands are small,
And so easy to hold,
My eyes, like the stars,
Or so I'm often told,
My legs are sculptured,
My tone is so tan,
He could just picture my feet,
A dainty pair in the sand,
My smile never dims,
And it makes him proud,
To say I'm his girl,
He's shout it out loud,
I don't need surgery,
Or a fake chin,
'Cause you made me feel good,
In my own skin.
Copyright ©
Writting_Fever
... [
2005-08-19 11:59:41]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: In My Skin
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:17:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
awww that was a happy ending :) great write, I really liked this one,
pix xx |
|
|
Re: In My Skin
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:38:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is wonderful! What a lovely write about finally being comfortable in your own skin...That's great that you have someone who makes you feel so good about yourself...as you should! Well done with this poem.
Scorp. |
|
|
Re: In My Skin
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 12:09:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i love the pov of this poem :D |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
