|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Try Me
Contributed by
juliette
on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 03:17:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Do not tread so softly across my heart,
Maybe I am craving something wild-
The presence of a twisted melody,
To singe the softness of this smile.
I am aging quickly,
feeling slighted,
With the passing of each new moon.
Imagining for once
not doing the right thing
Might get me up and out of this room.
Now I have never been completely righteous
I do not wear a fallen angels wings,
But my daring side,
so long buried under,
The continued failure
of yesterdays dreams-
So slowly reawakening,
a joyful vision that just might last
Bringing my stranger self back to me
as the hours tiptoe quietly past.
Each ounce of danger
drained from my existence-
Today leaves me hungry
for whatever is in store
So don't hadle me
with the gloves of a child....
I am so much stronger
than you give me credit for!
Copyright ©
juliette
... [
2005-08-19 15:17:29]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Try Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:44:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So don't hadle me
did you mean handle?
I loved the tiptoe .. just loved it!!! |
|
|
Re: Try Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 02:40:29 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A Child No More
I liked it, but I also felt the title needed to be... stronger. I hate titles! You finish a great poem, you're about to post it... and you need a title! Frustrating!
Well, I hope you get an awesome title for your awesome poem.
Take care.
David |
|
|
Re: Try Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 12:14:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
beautifuly exposed revealing and corageious
lovely work true 2 the heart and bold . . .
Ben |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
