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The Truth Is
Contributed by
Shnannon
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 10:54:31 PM in AEST
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We never had anything
So why do I feel like I'm losing something
I never told you the truth
Therefore I can't blame this feeling on you
We'll never have anything
So I can't feel like I'm losing something
I'll never tell you the truth
Therefore I can't be hurt by you
I'm here alone with myself
I'll never lose what I don't try to get
I'll never let the truth escape
I can't be hurt by what I don't say
But the truth is
That I hurt myself more
By keeping it in
Than you could ever hurt me
If I told you the true feelings
In my heart.
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-08-19 22:54:31]
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Re: The Truth Is
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by EricBRamey on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:06:32 PM AEST
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| Wow....this is a very powerful piece!!! I know the feeling very well...so I can relate...thank you for the poem...Eric |
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Re: The Truth Is
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by Stellar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:41:33 PM AEST
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Wow, so true, so true. Well done!
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Re: The Truth Is
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 09:34:15 AM AEST
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Excellent write, very powerful and it hits home with me. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Sonya
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Re: The Truth Is
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:57:57 PM AEST
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*****We never had anything
So why do I feel like I'm losing something
Yes, what you do not have is most important to you.
*****
Exactly.. guarding your heart.. feelings.
*****But the truth is
That I hurt myself more
By keeping it in
Than you could ever hurt me
If I told you the true feelings
In my heart.
Yes, one needs to let out that which bothers them so that they can be free of pain.
Wonderful expression of what lonesome means and the pain it sometimes brings.
Thank you for this write,
Raquel Leah ; ))
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