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Stuck
Contributed by
stellar
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:28:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I've lost touch with it all
I can't see two feet in front
I've handled it wrong
And I'm baring the grunt
At what point did it happen
What right choice didn't I make
Where did I fall back
What road do I need that I didn't take
Have I really gone too far
Does life truly run on and out of luck
It's not that I don't want to live
But how do I leave the place that I'm stuck
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stellar
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2005-08-19 23:28:45]
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Re: Stuck
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:40:22 PM AEST
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| Your frustration is vented very well here. I really enjoyed this write. Just hang in there, I have felt like this as I'm sure we all have a time or two. Remember the old saying....good things come to those who wait" Your good things are coming. I wish you peace, Laura |
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Re: Stuck
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:52:35 PM AEST
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nicely expressed. Do what I do blame it all the full moon everything seems to be amis durning this time sigh I understand right where your coming from
Michelle |
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Re: Stuck
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by oreo_kisses on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:40:09 AM AEST
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this is a really great poem it basically sums up whats going on in my mind half the time...
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! |
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