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Caramel
Contributed by
Vermilion
on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:21:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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We produce air guns In a rage against nothing
We bottle it up, we bottle it up
We sing for a thousand suns Reaching out for something
We can't do anything but bottle it up
And the harsh steel coolness of the blade at our wrists At the time of our twists Twisted laughter of the **** And the harsh steel coolness of the gun at our heads Longing for dread To one day be dead All we ever do is bottle it up
Been having a pretty bad day Every day of my life
We bottle it up, we bottle it up
Never gone my way Caramel flavoured lie
I don't know what to do but bottle it up And the harsh steel coolness of the blades at our wrists At the time of our twists Twisted laughter of the **** And the harsh steel coolness of the guns at our heads Longing for dread To one day be dead All we ever do is bottle it up
I don't need no, caramel I don't need a, wishful well It's just a phase, just a phase I don't want you I don't want you
Why do I want you?!
And the harsh steel coolness of the blades at our wrists At the time of our twists Twisted laughter of the **** And the harsh steel coolness of the guns at our heads Longing for dread To one day be dead All we ever do is Bottle the feelings up
Maybe the look is deranged Maybe the cooking is strange Maybe I'm just in your head One day we'll end up dead
Maybe I'm just a fool
And the harsh steel coolness of the blades at our wrists At the time of our twists Twisted laughter of the **** And the harsh steel coolness of the guns at our heads Longing for dread To one day be dead All we ever do is bottle it up
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Re: Caramel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:29:34 PM AEST (User
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Ok, damn, this poem scared the hell out of me, I could barely stand to finish, I know where you are going with this poem though, humans always find a way to destroy themselves, good write though. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Caramel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:37:51 PM AEST (User
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SLipSiX. comment made me laugh and I have to agree, good writing :) |
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Re: Caramel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST (User
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Very interesting. I like your style in this. |
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