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Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Let's watch a movie, or some t.v
I just want to lay next to you
Feel your body heat next to me
fight urges my hands want to ensue
Wrap your arms around me, my head on your chest
we're relaxed...pull the covers up around us
Neither one of us intent on getting much rest
we crave the same thing; no need to discuss
The look shared between us, is all that need be said
Here it is! At last, our first kiss---sparks fly
Fire of anticipation throughout my body spread
Mmm that was nice...you kiss me again as a reply
Let's take it slow, I'm not going anywhere
you are what my life's been lacking
This intimate connection is beyond compare
I promise to remain true, no heartache will I bring
Is that what you needed to hear? Well it's true
Planting kisses on my body, every curve, exploring
A lifelong love with you is all I plan to pursue
Fiery passion combusts---exploding
This night, this love, I never want it to end
held in your arms, the world is at my feet
Our nurturing friendship we watched transcend
With you in my life, I am now complete
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-08-20 17:05:04]
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Re: Complete
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:08:43 PM AEST
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| very sweet. lovely words placed in a beatuiful flow. great job |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:10:04 PM AEST
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hmm... congratulations on finding that someone. Good feeling - I know. :-D
And it just gets so that eternity is not long enough too.
Beautiful lines. Warm loving write.
Blessings, J. |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:11:24 PM AEST
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| Aye HauntedScorp, where've you been? It has been so long since I have read your work. A Very romantic, beautiful poem loved it. SLipSiX. |
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by Writting_Fever on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:29:12 PM AEST
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A very beautiful and sensual poem. I love the way that you made me picture you two together. It is a great feeling isn't it?!
Wonderful |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:29:17 PM AEST
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Scorpenator! That is truly an inspirational, wonderful, and beautifully written poem of new love and forever love. Penned so well with great talent. Thoroughly enjoyed this write and hoping that in how it could relate to my own life now and things goes as well for me and named withheld for privacy :) as they are with you.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:30:33 PM AEST
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| very sweet. Must feel good to be complete. Congrats. Thans for sharing |
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Re: Complete
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by brew on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 07:03:54 PM AEST
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Very nice and passionate write. Loved it. Glad to hear, some can be completed.! Hope this one brings you all the joy and love you have longed for.!
Brew~ |
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:14:37 PM AEST
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wow... i really hope this is true.. cause if it is i'm as glad as hell for you, scorp. it must be amazing for you if you are really going through this. well, written. keep up the good work!
~sprints |
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:16:48 PM AEST
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Scorpy, I am so happy for you. Isn't it absolutely the most wonderful feeling in the world to be completed by someone. That last piece of the puzzle that fits just perfectly. Wishing you happiness and hope this is your forever.
Rita |
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:24:53 PM AEST
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The passion drips from my monitor..lol
phew..
I love how you've marshalled the ideas, from beginning to proverbial end Scorp,
on new love and things of the like..
(nods head in agreement)
Love is grand-
As Always-
B
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 12:32:13 AM AEST
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| Scorp this was a beautiful write, so intimate, so romantic. Peace, Laura |
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by Skinney86 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 12:45:44 AM AEST
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| Wow. This is a poem that will last the test of time. This is one that can be read many years from now, and still mean the same thing, love will never change. |
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by somedaylove on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:19:56 AM AEST
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| How beautiful, wonderful feelings flow as i read.......sounds like you soulmate in life. May we all be lucky enough to find a person to share life with like this. keep up the great writes. |
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:29:30 AM AEST
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Awh very sweet. good luck to u both.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:47:37 AM AEST
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Depicted very nicely lovely poetry filled with longing thoughts and heartfelt wishes, well done scorp as always . . .
Ben |
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by Lancaster on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:30:32 PM AEST
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| wow scorp..this was just beutiful...and what makes it more than just beutiful...is that your honesty and sincerity come through strongly.....this poem was amazing and as real as they come....you are a genius....nighty night scorpy |
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by Willofree on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:06:39 AM AEST
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You really are a romantic Scorp, and maybe that's why you write love poetry so well. I agree that this poem has a nice flow and rhythum :), good choice of words don't you think.
Really Scorp, it is a lovely write of a consumated love relationship
Will |
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by Archie on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:00:27 PM AEST
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| Good write. I should say more but i think your words are adequately said. |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:23:33 AM AEST
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Hi Mom, I'm home...pardon me for taking so long to get to this delicious write...
Wow, woo weeeee.... Scorp, you hit every angle of my mind reading this.. now I feel complete.. you are an excellent writer, do you know that? What a warm and cozy write here.. its just balaazin...with love...
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: Complete
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 06:45:13 PM AEST
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beautifully sweet, written gently and in such a classy
romantic way,
hugs n' love nessa |
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