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All These Words
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 12:45:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Nauseous
Sickened
Twisted in pain
Turned inside out
Can't remember my name
No one to blame...but me
Full of fear
Anxious
How do I appear?
Just fine
Well, I've...
Lived this way for years
Nervous
Weakened by words
Spoken inaudibly
Shaken
Overtaken
Sadly mistaken
Afraid
Delayed
Beaten myself
For old mistakes
Thoughts replaced
Crying
Keep trying
Too damn stubborn to fail
Laura Horner
8-16-05
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Re: All These Words
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 01:17:16 AM AEST
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Laura, I am so sorry you have to go through this. Sounds like more than OC to me. When is the last time you were analyzed to OC? If you need to talk I am always here.
Warm hugz,
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Re: All These Words
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 03:24:40 AM AEST
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| strong write, i can feel your emotion you've put into this, i hope you win... great write powerful, just a little sad. A++++ |
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Re: All These Words
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by BloodyTears5 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 03:45:04 AM AEST
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| i liked it. had many powerful words and showed much emotion. keep up the good work! |
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Re: All These Words
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:07:48 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing, my friend.
Hang tuff.
Luv, huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: All These Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:28:06 AM AEST
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laura my sister so deep and held back and yet revealing you've done well strong write
beautifuly express . . .
peace2u my sister laura
Ben |
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Re: All These Words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:56:48 PM AEST
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| strong words |
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Re: All These Words
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 12:11:09 PM AEST
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Laura my friend,
A very succinct poignant powerful write and message. Your willingness to experiment with different unique styles of writing is brave....yes I think it takes a certain amount of courage to be unique. And rather then "stubborness", I think it is your courage and inner strength of your spirit that helps you persevere
Hang tough my friend, you are worth the effort
Will |
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Re: All These Words
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 01:14:34 AM AEST
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love the flow of this one |
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Re: All These Words
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:49:19 PM AEST
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Time to turn outside in.. grab hold of self..something in you needs completion.. what is it you need to add to yourself.. its been a long time, your heart needs some mature stimulation from the Lord... Seek Him.
Raquel Leah
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Re: All These Words
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 07:20:53 PM AEST
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Hippienurse
You wrot this for me didn't you. Kidding.
I have had many of the same feelings that you state.
Wonderful poem.
I think you will touch many with this writting.
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Re: All These Words
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 02:25:43 AM AEST
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(((((((((( LAURABEAM ))))))))))
This shows a tenacity, defiance, and strength even though much pain is endured. Me likes.
Tim |
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