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Spectre
Contributed by
Freak-of-the-Week
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 03:38:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I asked him once, please hold my hand, He looked at me and smiled - Beneath his deep brown eyes, a heart, With kindness undefiled.
The long brown hair about his face, So handsome on that day - I reached to it a timid touch Before I pulled away.
My eyes chanced his then wandered off, My cheeks a blooming red - I felt his gaze reach through my face To touch my soul instead.
My dormant heart leapt from my chest, And shivers clutched my spine - As I saw him lift his hand And gently reach for mine
That day beneath the autumn sky, I thought Id found true love - Looking in those deep brown eyes, That met mine from above.
I leaned in slowly for a kiss, And felt his lips so near - Begging him to speak the words I thought Id never hear
But that was all some time ago, A memory cold and dead - Its all a ghost that haunts my mind And fills my heart with lead.
He was just another love Who quickly bade farewell - Now the loss shall haunt my mind, And break my heart, as well.
I just asked once, please hold my hand To wake me from this dream - Just as my lips kissed empty air, Forever, it would seem.
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Re: Spectre
(User Rating: 1 ) by vampyrekiss on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:07:14 PM AEST (User
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This was really awsome lots of emotions and all that jazz :) feel better youll get your true love sooner or later (hopefully sooner)
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Re: Spectre
(User Rating: 1 ) by AshRayne on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:09:04 PM AEST (User
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well, i must say, what a beautiful poem, it touched me. if only our ghosts would remain ours.
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed for you are perfection. |
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