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Missing you
Contributed by
wordsy
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Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
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Though a world there is between us
A many a measured mile
No distance that comes between us
Can fade your lasting smile
And the tears that seem to fall
Like a seasons pouring rain
Can never stem the tides
Of this lonely heart again
And the days we spent together
Are numbered all too few
And my wishes are forever
To spend them all with you.
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2003-01-14 18:00:00]
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Re: Missing you
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:15:54 PM AEST
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Another beauty here, wordsy.... (and you talk about writers' block??)
Loved this
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Re: Missing you
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:06:30 AM AEST
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And i hope that she does see this
That your time with her is spent
For you my friend have not yet kissed
the one who shall repent..
If only one moment should shine
And find your eyes all gray
Then she surely would take the time
To gently pave your way..
Beautiful write wordsy....your talent is soaring like the eagles wings that fly freely over the mountains of this earth....keep writing ....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Missing you
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by Clown_Prince on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 12:33:28 AM AEST
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| This was a beautiful poem. Really, it was, and I can totally understand what it's about. I liked it. ^^ Nice write. |
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