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i hope your happy
Contributed by
cinderella88
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:32:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your words
Echo in my mind
Over and over
Confusing me
Leading me on
Then dropping me
Killing my soul
My emotions
And my hope
Crushing my heart
With a single look.
So much pain
Do you notice?
Do you even see?
What youre doing?
Youre killing me
Slowly but surely
You will destroy me
I hope youre happy
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cinderella88
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2005-08-22 06:32:59]
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Re: i hope your happy
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:59:22 AM AEST
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a brilliant poem, very powerful
well done |
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Re: i hope your happy
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by Shorty_88 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:23:31 AM AEST
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I very powerful peice of poetry.Keep up the writing.
Warmest Regards, Tara |
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Re: i hope your happy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 08:01:15 AM AEST
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excellent writing..
so many of us feel this way but, are to afaird to show it..
I can relate to this alot
ty for sharin....write on
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: i hope your happy
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by syenn0512 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:25:30 AM AEST
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| Nicely written |
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Re: i hope your happy
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 05:30:07 PM AEST
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nice job i liked it , i know the feelings you have.
tasha |
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