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do you know?
Contributed by
nannerz
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 08:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do you know what it feels like?
like nobody wants you?
like your all alone
in this big empty world?
Do you know what its like
to have your pride
stomped on
time and time again?
like your less
then the gum on some kids
shoe
Do you know what its like
to belive someone cares
then walk in on them
***** someone else
Do you know?
do you really?
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Re: do you know?
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by Sahara on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 08:26:55 PM AEST
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Good write hit home with me.
I know, I know it all been through nearly everything bad that could possibly happen to me.
Sonya |
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Re: do you know?
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:09:24 PM AEST
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very powerful write.....containing a lot of brash and hurt emotions.....you did well to try and get the reader into your shoes....
hope to you dear poet. |
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Re: do you know?
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by AnastasiaN on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 04:38:19 AM AEST
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| yes i know and it's a really %$&**# feeling...that's when you throw them in with yesterday's trash as i hope you've already done and find someone who truly does care and treats you better...easier said than done i know...but i've been there. hope you're doing better |
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