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Don't Punish me
Contributed by
gypsy
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:57:39 PM in AEST
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Don't Punish me
U made me notice
I Saw what they couldn't see
I listened for hours
that turned the light on
Gotta glimpse of your heart
Saw a refection of my own
So familiar to me
But you dont see (back-up vox)
Cuz she broke your trust
But I am your friend
Don't punish me
Standin behind u
hoping U will awake
I am more home to U
We want the same
Not just a pacifier
I am salvation
Look at my colors
Come feel the fire
But U won't see (back-up vox)
Cuz
She took your eyes
But I am your friend
Don't punish me
(bridge)
I took your hand
And I felt your colors
A prism that I am
That turned my sences on
Can't U see who I am
My hearts in your hands
And U don't see (back-up vox)
Cuz
She Stained your soul
But a am your friend
Don't punish me
See all that I am
Oh She made U bitter
But I am your friend
Don't punish me
Yeah , she broke your trust,
She took your eyes,
She stained your soul,
She made U bitter,
Come stand beside me,
I am your friend,
Open your arms,
See all that I am
Don't punish me....... Don't punish me
Yeah , she broke your trust,
She took your eyes,
She stained your soul,
She made U bitter,
Come stand beside me,
I am your friend,
Open your arms,
See all that I am
Don't punish me........Don't Punish Me.....Don't Punish You
Gypsy
August 19, 2005
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Re: Don't Punish me
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by brew on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:59:45 PM AEST
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So true for many, yet they dont LOOk, like we do.! Good write, and emotional.
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Re: Don't Punish me
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:19:44 PM AEST
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Well written and emotive. It's a thoughtful theme, and so commendable. I don't like the 'u' for 'you', though. It is never a good idea for poetry, as it (I feel) degrades the power of the words.
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Re: Don't Punish me
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:50:01 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful and full of emotions, that speak to my heart, great job..
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Re: Don't Punish me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:02:28 AM AEST
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| Mm a beautiful poem, packed with many emotions and feelings. SLipSiX. |
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