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The Eternal Tear
Contributed by
THEL0STDREAMER
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:59:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Never again,
that's what she said when she saw him fade away.
Never again,
that's what she thought when he left her that day.
She knew it was coming,
she could feel it in her heart.
She didn't think it could have such a bloody end,
when it had such a happy start.
Somehow, she knew he wouldn't
be at her side for too long.
She knew it, but couldn't believe it
with his heart is where hers will always belong.
No, he hadn't loved her like she wanted...
He loved her more.
Yes, he'd closed that window to her world,
but then he opened a door.
He opened the door to a place
she'd never seen nor known.
He opened the door that showed her
she was never truly alone.
Now he soars high above the clouds,
taking away her every fear.
At an age young as eighteen,
when he died, she cried the eternal tear.
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THEL0STDREAMER
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Re: The Eternal Tear
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by Shattered_soul on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:45:20 PM AEST
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I truly liked this poem, it is so sad yet so beautiful.
"No, he hadn't loved her like she wanted...
He loved her more.
Yes, he'd closed that window to her world,
but then he opened a door."
Best part!!!
S.S
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Re: The Eternal Tear
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by Stellar on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:57:15 PM AEST
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How sad.
I don't know what else to say really.
This truly a beautiful poem.
Take Care,
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Re: The Eternal Tear
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:34:55 AM AEST
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wow this is a beatiful write i can feel the emotion in it.. i like this write alot
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Re: The Eternal Tear
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:47:33 AM AEST
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being in her shoes is a pair i know all to well, i know that pain, and i know the joy of it,
very well written, i loved every word
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Re: The Eternal Tear
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by Flyinglow on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:41:59 AM AEST
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Amazing write, alot of memorable lines, especially
No, he hadn't loved her like she wanted...
He loved her more.
Yes, he'd closed that window to her world,
but then he opened a door.
Such a great couple of lines, too bad i didnt think of it
I like your style, probly cause i have the same
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