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I wasn't prepared for this
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:54:53 AM in AEST
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when the tide is low
I'll tell you that I've told you so
rain falls down and evaporate
I'll say sorry but I don't gurantee I won't irritate
Cats run to me
They wrap themselves around my ankles
I try to leave
but they held me tighter
Tighter to the ground.
I'm rooted and I'm drowned
in the dark mirths of quick sand
Quick, take my hand.
Disappearing smiles
Myraids of emerald crowns
I'm blinded by its beauty
as such was I a filthy
little kid
everyone ditched.
Resigning eyes
tears gone dry
a deepened wrinkle
cats they whimper
and beg to be free
I said no, upon no decree.
saddened expressions
counted ways of deception
from one to ten
who is my friend?
and yet, in it together they remain
bundled up in the cold misty rain.
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Re: I wasn't prepared for this
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:57:37 AM AEST
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great poem, i like your style
keep it up, megs xXx |
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Re: I wasn't prepared for this
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by Shattered_soul on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:25:54 PM AEST
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That was really crazy but I think I understand, is this song full of metaphores? like the cats, and the quicksand, well that is how I see it in my eyes and I will take your poem in with my meaning.
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P.S Good write! |
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