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Song Gone Wrong
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:36:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No lines ever ring throughout my mind
Theres a passion I cant seem to find
They pour their heart on to the paper
I could never compare with her
My rhymes arent the blood of my life
They dont sing out my personal strife
My words dont bring tears to peoples eyes
Because the sadness is not there
My songs dont cause smiles to erupt
Because I couldnt really even care
No emotion ever leaks from these lines
Because I let no passion be released
And no thoughts are ever inspired by my own
Because my hunger cannot be appeased
Im too hollow- Im empty inside
I cant pour out my heart
Its too dear to me to part
And I cant leave it there
Alone and not able to fair
Leave this to someone else
I wont give in to the impulse
I might never be able to write my heart out
And my emotions may never be able to shout
But its enough to say my writings mine
And with that thought Ill be fine
At least I can call it my rhyme
Even if its never put to time
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EverlastingDawn
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2005-08-23 10:36:12]
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Re: Song Gone Wrong
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by seci on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:43:51 AM AEST
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| i like this poem being because i used to feel the same exact way. i would read other people poems and i would be like gosh how did they get so many people to read there poems. it seem every poem like that they were pouring there heart out. but i realize that how i write is different. even if one person reads, it feels good. but my writing is different and that what makes a person unique. i think you are unique as well. i love this poem. keep writing |
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Re: Song Gone Wrong
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:18:24 PM AEST
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oh, this poem was great! and what are you saying? you're definately talking from the heart there-- i mean, really, you are. just re-read it. well, done though, the poem is true for many people (myself included). just remeber, if your heart wants to talk, let it, don't hold it back. great write, keep up the good work!
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Re: Song Gone Wrong
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by guiltycircles on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 06:18:49 AM AEST
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| this is awesome, your talent is clear!!!! well done |
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