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Shame
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:39:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The feeling is frozen,
Thoughts torn on the inside,
I hide,
Away from the emotions.
I feel chosen,
Deep inside I know,
I show,
Only little pieces of me.
Shame,
For all the broken thoughts,
That I did not share,
Shame,
For all the hurt that did not,
Escape from closed lips.
My soul cries out for freedom,
Longs for closure,
Suppose more,
Perhaps I could have freed myself.
My body is my prison.
I hide inside my cell,
My Hell,
I created my reformatory.
Shame,
I did not stand,
No, I turned away.
Shame,
I could not speak my mind.
I was afraid to defy.
My poor heart,
I encased you in ice,
For a price,
No fire can destroy you.
Oh, my mind,
Wish I could turn,
I yearn,
On a whim that you would return.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2005-08-23 21:39:11]
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Re: Shame
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:53:42 AM AEST
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Yeh hine sight as they say well wory not we've
all been there and this is a well crafted poem a truce if will that allows hope within your heart very nice poetry you write.
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Re: Shame
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by anitajames on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:35:37 AM AEST
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Powerful. I especially like the verse,
My body is my prison
So true, and one we can never escape. |
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