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Walking Alone
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:48:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I walk alone
taking my time
I need no one,
life is a tease
got me on my knees
and I'm pretending...
pretending
I'm in control
and I know what's gonna happen,
so I stay
instead of running away
my pride keeps me in pain.
I'm hanging with the crew
acting like I got a clue
I'm good at this game you never know I am Insane ,
look you in the eye
give you that fake smile
when all the time
I
just wanna get away.
Confusion of a lost soul
wondering
what's really happening,
so tired of pretending
to understand.
Reflections of my face
Insanely smiling
is haunting
as I walk away
alone.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-08-23 21:48:26]
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Re: Walking Alone
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:57:56 PM AEST
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| Okay this is too close. You have to read my poem called I walk alone. Your poem has a different meaning than mine and your verses do not flow as cleanly but that is okay. You wrote a good poem which comes from your heart. You don't have to read my poem unless you want to. |
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Re: Walking Alone
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:28:13 PM AEST
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| i really really really like this. it reminds me of a lot of feelings i've had. amazing job! |
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Re: Walking Alone
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:52:12 AM AEST
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So sad but great writing.
I do know alone and can tottaly relate but I'm alone by choice.
keep writing and it's great to see a new post from u.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Walking Alone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:31:03 AM AEST
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| so sad but know this feeling well. That is how i spent most of my life and it sucks. Good write |
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Re: Walking Alone
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:38:08 AM AEST
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| I can relate all to well...great write. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Walking Alone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:42:12 AM AEST
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I have walked alone for large part of my life , always in my mind... I hope you find fufillment and happiness , well written my friend
Hugs Leia36 |
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