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Beyond My Love and Rage
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:59:08 PM in AEST
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Girl in the wind,
blowing open wide the doors of my life..
which way are we going?
Standing against the lurid sky
on the stark brink of ocean..
arms outstretched,
as if our love and hunger
could embrace the world-
and I, in my inner gloom
playing my poetic dance
only seeing and asking the answerable-
Brave and cunning, I speak to the keyboard,
knowing it would not answer back..
and not to reply-
when I ask, not wanting to hear,
as you, with the vast sunset, merge,
a multitude of dreams away..
uniquely alone and outside of me
in the purity and rarity of these many moments...
immeasurable beyond my love and rage;
..as the dying call of gulls resound:
Girl in the wind
throwing aside the tight shutters
of my life-
which way ae we going?
Billy
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:23:17 AM AEST
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mysterious I loved this Billy
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:27:55 AM AEST
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Mystical and mysterious....beautifully written.
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:44:17 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:08:59 AM AEST
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Well now! This is a very vivid and expressive piece of work, one that is a great pleasure to read. You infuse your words with mystery and grandeur. Quite impressive.
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:19:03 AM AEST
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| nicely done, very romantic with a hint of sadness. great write. A++++ |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by waos on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:28:11 AM AEST
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Had a sweet simple end to a poem that got me into it and feeling the loneliness
and pain of separation - at least to me. I liked the part about speaking to
the keyboard and it not answering back.
Awesome poem once again.
~Kara~~Waos~ |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:16:19 AM AEST
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What a lonely feeling this gives me and very relatable hope u find your dream, a real beauty this poem, something about the way it accenuates some distant emotion in all of us, great as usual Bill . . .
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by brew on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:31:05 AM AEST
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The well penned, speaks for its self. It takes what is known, and sets the picture, for the out come to be. As, always another creative, and heart given write. Absolutely magnificent! Im sure the wind, will bring the answer.
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:57:28 AM AEST
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Wow,
How do you do it?? This is amazing, as I was reading this I had such a vivd image in my mind and could hear the call of the sea gulls resounding !!! You should tell her Billy, so romantic! Good luck,
Kara |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by anitajames on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:27:46 AM AEST
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| I loved the vivid imagery and the mystery of the poem. |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:31:36 PM AEST
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| Mysterious, as in not knowing. Raging against the past and fearful of the future. Love as in holding someone tightly to your heart and wanting to share the inner most of yourself with them. Caring enough to open those shutters to again sing the songs of love and life and being willing to dance that dance once again. I hope your wishes come true. We all want that in life, but we have to be open for it. This is so beautifully open and your heart shines. Let's hope it becomes a solid beam of love's light. Rita |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 12:18:32 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, wonderful imagery, I really enjoyed reading this piece.
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:16:33 PM AEST
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Billy this is absolutely outstanding my dear friend. I feel ur yearning and desire to have the one u long for. I wish u the best my dear friend and I hope and pray that ur wishes come true. Who so ever is lucky enough to have u in their life should count their blessings everyday. You Are One of a kind my friend. A genuine, loving and sincere guy.
Hugs from ur fan always,
Dreamer |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:57:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful sentiments Billy..........magnificent poise as always.
I hope against all hopes this girl finds you. |
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Re: Beyond My Love and Rage
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:45:52 AM AEST
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Dear, sweet master of words, how you doth moveth hearts.
Billy, this was outstanding! So deeply profound and
beautiful. I love the use of the italics at the end......almost
like a whisper.....
I am awed once more.
yours,
~Breezy |
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