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leave me alone!
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 07:45:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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leave me alone
get out of my face
just back off, okay?
give me some space
i don't give a damn
bout what you think of me
leave me alone
and just let me be
no, i don't need your help
i can manage on my own
go bug someone else
and leave me alone
i really don't care
if you've something to say
you never before
gave me the time of day
so leave me alone
i don't want to talk to you
i won't change my mind
no matter what you do
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-08-24 07:45:27]
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Re: leave me alone!
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by JenJen on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:35:46 AM AEST
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WOW! this poem is really powerful! you can tell by the words that you used how angry you were! well done
all my love hope and hugges
jenny
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Re: leave me alone!
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by cutestmofo on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:30:22 AM AEST
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| ok i'm scared such anger lol wow impressive great poem and great show of emotions (sobbing)brilliant just brilliant |
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Re: leave me alone!
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:51:46 AM AEST
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The simplicity of the rhyme scheme and the word choice intensifies the stubborn tone of this piece, I think. I, however, tend to be more inclined to read and more impressed by poems with stronger word choice and perhaps a stronger rhyme scheme. But like I said, it seems to fit the tone kind of, so I'm deeming it a good write.
Love and peace,
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Re: leave me alone!
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:46:23 PM AEST
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A whirling spiral of anger displayed in this write.
Can almost feel the screams from here
Steve |
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Re: leave me alone!
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:02:26 PM AEST
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| Very good, it really expresses how everyone feels at one time or another. |
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Re: leave me alone!
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:53:17 AM AEST
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| wow, very gd write. really powerfull words/phrases. well doneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
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