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Paranoia
Contributed by
WAE
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:39:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Paranoia
Nothing is for sure.
No one can be trusted.
This world is a trap.
All people are disaster.
There is no peace for me
And there is no tomorrow.
I am afraid to breathe
So deep is bloody horror.
The place is full of threat;
It comes from every corner.
I am a miserable human pet,
Pathetic, little mourner.
Should I ask you for help?
I don't feel like I need it.
The world is the bigger hell
And no one wants to heal it!
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WAE
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2005-08-24 15:39:28]
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Re: Paranoia
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by dagonet on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 01:57:35 PM AEST
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very nicely written, conveys such a serious message in a short concise poem. i really like the flow of the poem but i especially like the 2nd and final stanza's. you are an excellent wordsmith my freind, and your message is very clear(unlike my own scribbles).
nicely done, ryan. |
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Re: Paranoia
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by LeahBeth on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:38:22 AM AEST
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how much I like it!!!! You are a very good writer. I like your work a lot.
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