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Marked with high spirits
Contributed by
Kingsman
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 07:39:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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a valiant heart marked with high spirits never had the chance to shine behind the curtains afraid of the audiance, but chin-up and reckless never needed 6 minutes of fame, but 6 seconds his chest was stout, his mind was militant he was hardly cocky with a gritty smile of a hot shot this man was rock hard, forward and fearless he knew his life sentence, he was holding the lyrics a relentless being never showing the white flag hes just lost in the depths looking for the right path the curtains have him hidden, feeling no love his only hear is he finds his destiny and folds up
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2005-08-24 19:39:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Marked with high spirits
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:02:13 PM AEST (User
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I thought this was good because it isn't just a poem spouting off the feeling of
the day or simply stating circumstances. This was descriptive and let the reader
look into it and consider it. Nice work.
~Kara~~Waos~ |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kingsman on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:11:48 PM AEST (User
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Thanks, appreciated ;) |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
(User Rating: 1 ) by cutestmofo on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:22:50 PM AEST (User
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i have no idea what the first person said but i loved it it was awesome plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzwrite more |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kingsman on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:36:21 PM AEST (User
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lol thanks for the origonal comment |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:46:37 PM AEST (User
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nice. weird but good. |
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