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Stuck in a Moment
Contributed by
stellar
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:09:17 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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She lays the book down
The pages are turning too fast
She's heading into the future
Without knowing where she's placed her past
She's holding out for the moment of her life
That place in time
When all with the world appears right
She hides her face from the truth
Stuck in the photographs
All hung in her room
A moment with everything
And nothing to lose
Surrounded by love
And the option to choose
She's stuck in the photographs
All hung in her room
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stellar
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2005-08-24 20:09:17]
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Re: Stuck in a Moment
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by tecnorobo on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:35:24 PM AEST
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high school is certainly a great time. in fact thats where i'm at currently...
but you have to live one day at a time, because there are many more moments to be enjoyed than the last great one you had. |
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Re: Stuck in a Moment
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by waos on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:08:52 PM AEST
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Thats really cool. I just graduated from high school this last June and am
leaving for university in a week and a half. I like the sentiment in this poem
and how you ended it, as she's stuck in her memories kinda thing.
However for me, I'm looking to the future, for a lot of the past is not something
I love to remember.
Nice job on this poem.
~Kara~~Waos~ |
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Re: Stuck in a Moment
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:15:22 PM AEST
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| A interesting poem, I understand how you feel, sometimes you look back on good times and wonder where they went.SLipSiX. |
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Re: Stuck in a Moment
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:50:17 AM AEST
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Yea i know exactly how this feels...I graduated from high school 5 yrs ago. The BEST time of my life, better than college. I often do look back. Nice write.
Tanya |
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Re: Stuck in a Moment
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:17:07 PM AEST
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I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL. I am going to be a senior, and all i can do is wonder how the time went so fast. I still remember the first day I walken into my highschool freshman year. Now all I can do is stare at the words my friends wrote in my yearbook. Thank you for sharing this.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: Stuck in a Moment
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 12:55:04 PM AEST
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this is excellent, ahh nostalgia:) hugs n' love nessa
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